El Peligroso
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|  Subject: Loxley MS  Tue Jan 02, 2007 4:46 pm | |
| sorry for all those on DT who have already become bored of seing this but I made a couple of alterations...
feedback, as always is very much appreciated
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Design G
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| | Subject: Re: Loxley MS Tue Jan 02, 2007 4:50 pm | |
| We don't visit there any more.
It's looking good but I don't think you can use that font for the body of the letter as it's not a clear enough font. Logo's looking good. Nice blue. |
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Kelly Cr
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| | Subject: Re: Loxley MS Tue Jan 02, 2007 4:52 pm | |
| Loving the business card alot.
Don't think the 'With Compliments' script font fits with the rest of the type style. |
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El Peligroso
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| | Subject: Re: Loxley MS Tue Jan 02, 2007 4:55 pm | |
| I shall review my work shortly DG,
kelly i was going for a personal hand written feel but i guess it hasn't worked. again i shall review it later.
Cheers
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dumb blo
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| | Subject: Re: Loxley MS Tue Jan 02, 2007 4:56 pm | |
| | I Likes no faults from me |
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El Peligroso
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| | Subject: Re: Loxley MS Wed Jan 03, 2007 8:42 am | |
| After taking your points in hand, what do you think of the changes?
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Design G
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| | Subject: Re: Loxley MS Wed Jan 03, 2007 8:56 am | |
| | With compliements is much better but I'm still not sure about the body font, maybe it's too thick. I'm not sure?? |
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designcode
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| | Subject: Re: Loxley MS Wed Aug 08, 2007 11:21 am | |
| good creativity.
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