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Toon Admin

Age : 28 Joined : 15 Nov 2006 Posts : 746 Location : Sheffield
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Ron 123 Guest
| Subject: Re: New Flyer Wed Nov 22, 2006 1:50 pm | |
| | I think it's because there's too much text to fit into the space, can you take any of the text out?? |
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Toon Admin

Age : 28 Joined : 15 Nov 2006 Posts : 746 Location : Sheffield
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El Peligroso

Age : 25 Joined : 20 Nov 2006 Posts : 489 Location : Sheffield 6
| Subject: Re: New Flyer Wed Nov 22, 2006 2:00 pm | |
| i'd say try making the text smaller depending on the flyer size... _________________ Graphic and Web Design Forum |
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Design G Guest
| Subject: Re: New Flyer Wed Nov 22, 2006 2:05 pm | |
| I would make the black text a bit smaller and maybe some of the headings bigger to help the hierarchy, it's very clear colour-wise but not so much type size-wise. Apart from that, as usual clear, concise and well layed out.  |
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El Peligroso

Age : 25 Joined : 20 Nov 2006 Posts : 489 Location : Sheffield 6
| Subject: Re: New Flyer Wed Nov 22, 2006 2:06 pm | |
| what is with the two white lines on the top image?
they look a little out of position, to me... _________________ Graphic and Web Design Forum |
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Toon Admin

Age : 28 Joined : 15 Nov 2006 Posts : 746 Location : Sheffield
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El Peligroso

Age : 25 Joined : 20 Nov 2006 Posts : 489 Location : Sheffield 6
| Subject: Re: New Flyer Wed Nov 22, 2006 2:33 pm | |
| maybe try not having the ' sorry i cant help with your boiler ' text going all the way across the page.
I would also try lining the yellow answer text with the ...'s and ...'s if you get what i mean. _________________ Graphic and Web Design Forum |
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Toon Admin

Age : 28 Joined : 15 Nov 2006 Posts : 746 Location : Sheffield
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Kira-Dee

Age : 22 Joined : 16 Nov 2006 Posts : 333 Location : Sheffield
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Toon Admin

Age : 28 Joined : 15 Nov 2006 Posts : 746 Location : Sheffield
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Kira-Dee

Age : 22 Joined : 16 Nov 2006 Posts : 333 Location : Sheffield
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El Peligroso

Age : 25 Joined : 20 Nov 2006 Posts : 489 Location : Sheffield 6
| Subject: Re: New Flyer Thu Nov 23, 2006 9:06 am | |
| I was thinking more like the : after answer being lined up on the same line as the last . on the top line and the first . on the other, might just be me but i like that sort of thing _________________ Graphic and Web Design Forum |
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Ron 123 Guest
| Subject: Re: New Flyer Fri Nov 24, 2006 11:30 am | |
| | I think it's much improved already |
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Toon Admin

Age : 28 Joined : 15 Nov 2006 Posts : 746 Location : Sheffield
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stealth- Guest
| Subject: Re: New Flyer Mon Feb 12, 2007 8:36 am | |
| | Like the varying colours |
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