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Toon Admin

Number of posts: 748 Age: 29 Location: Sheffield Registration date: 2006-11-15
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Ron 123 Guest
 | Subject: Re: New Flyer Wed Nov 22, 2006 2:50 pm | |
| I think it's because there's too much text to fit into the space, can you take any of the text out?? |
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Toon Admin

Number of posts: 748 Age: 29 Location: Sheffield Registration date: 2006-11-15
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El Peligroso

Number of posts: 489 Age: 27 Location: Sheffield 6 Registration date: 2006-11-20
 | Subject: Re: New Flyer Wed Nov 22, 2006 3:00 pm | |
| i'd say try making the text smaller depending on the flyer size... |
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Design G Guest
 | Subject: Re: New Flyer Wed Nov 22, 2006 3:05 pm | |
| I would make the black text a bit smaller and maybe some of the headings bigger to help the hierarchy, it's very clear colour-wise but not so much type size-wise. Apart from that, as usual clear, concise and well layed out.  |
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El Peligroso

Number of posts: 489 Age: 27 Location: Sheffield 6 Registration date: 2006-11-20
 | Subject: Re: New Flyer Wed Nov 22, 2006 3:06 pm | |
| what is with the two white lines on the top image? they look a little out of position, to me... |
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Toon Admin

Number of posts: 748 Age: 29 Location: Sheffield Registration date: 2006-11-15
 | Subject: Re: New Flyer Wed Nov 22, 2006 3:19 pm | |
| New version with smaller black text:  The lines on the top were meant to look like this.
Last edited by on Wed Dec 06, 2006 9:23 am; edited 1 time in total |
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El Peligroso

Number of posts: 489 Age: 27 Location: Sheffield 6 Registration date: 2006-11-20
 | Subject: Re: New Flyer Wed Nov 22, 2006 3:33 pm | |
| maybe try not having the ' sorry i cant help with your boiler ' text going all the way across the page. I would also try lining the yellow answer text with the ...'s and ...'s if you get what i mean. |
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Toon Admin

Number of posts: 748 Age: 29 Location: Sheffield Registration date: 2006-11-15
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Kira-Dee

Number of posts: 333 Age: 24 Location: Sheffield Registration date: 2006-11-16
 | Subject: Re: New Flyer Wed Nov 22, 2006 4:57 pm | |
| I Like the colouring under the woman it looks like she is doing press ups on water, It may sound wierd but look close |
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Toon Admin

Number of posts: 748 Age: 29 Location: Sheffield Registration date: 2006-11-15
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Kira-Dee

Number of posts: 333 Age: 24 Location: Sheffield Registration date: 2006-11-16
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El Peligroso

Number of posts: 489 Age: 27 Location: Sheffield 6 Registration date: 2006-11-20
 | Subject: Re: New Flyer Thu Nov 23, 2006 10:06 am | |
| I was thinking more like the : after answer being lined up on the same line as the last . on the top line and the first . on the other, might just be me but i like that sort of thing |
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Ron 123 Guest
 | Subject: Re: New Flyer Fri Nov 24, 2006 12:30 pm | |
| I think it's much improved already |
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Toon Admin

Number of posts: 748 Age: 29 Location: Sheffield Registration date: 2006-11-15
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stealth- Guest
 | Subject: Re: New Flyer Mon Feb 12, 2007 9:36 am | |
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