Graphic Design and Web Design Forum Graphic Design and Web Design Forum for Designers and Coders     Graphic Design and Web Design Forum :: General :: Help Me!!  New Flyer     Author Message Toon Admin Age : 28 Joined : 15 Nov 2006 Posts : 746 Location : Sheffield Subject: New Flyer   Wed Nov 22, 2006 1:43 pm Attached is a flyer I've done but I don't like the typography layout as it is please crit would like to hear any ideas: _________________ Colour Printing and Integrated Cards Graphics and Web Design Graphic and Web Design Forum Social Bookmarking for Designers Logo Design UK Last edited by on Wed Dec 06, 2006 8:22 am; edited 2 times in total   Ron 123 Guest Subject: Re: New Flyer   Wed Nov 22, 2006 1:50 pm I think it's because there's too much text to fit into the space, can you take any of the text out??   Toon Admin Age : 28 Joined : 15 Nov 2006 Posts : 746 Location : Sheffield Subject: Re: New Flyer   Wed Nov 22, 2006 1:51 pm Nope, not my content. _________________ Colour Printing and Integrated Cards Graphics and Web Design Graphic and Web Design Forum Social Bookmarking for Designers Logo Design UK   El Peligroso Age : 25 Joined : 20 Nov 2006 Posts : 489 Location : Sheffield 6 Subject: Re: New Flyer   Wed Nov 22, 2006 2:00 pm i'd say try making the text smaller depending on the flyer size... _________________ Graphic and Web Design Forum   Design G Guest Subject: Re: New Flyer   Wed Nov 22, 2006 2:05 pm I would make the black text a bit smaller and maybe some of the headings bigger to help the hierarchy, it's very clear colour-wise but not so much type size-wise. Apart from that, as usual clear, concise and well layed out.   El Peligroso Age : 25 Joined : 20 Nov 2006 Posts : 489 Location : Sheffield 6 Subject: Re: New Flyer   Wed Nov 22, 2006 2:06 pm what is with the two white lines on the top image? they look a little out of position, to me... _________________ Graphic and Web Design Forum   Toon Admin Age : 28 Joined : 15 Nov 2006 Posts : 746 Location : Sheffield Subject: Re: New Flyer   Wed Nov 22, 2006 2:19 pm New version with smaller black text: The lines on the top were meant to look like this. _________________ Colour Printing and Integrated Cards Graphics and Web Design Graphic and Web Design Forum Social Bookmarking for Designers Logo Design UK Last edited by on Wed Dec 06, 2006 8:23 am; edited 1 time in total   El Peligroso Age : 25 Joined : 20 Nov 2006 Posts : 489 Location : Sheffield 6 Subject: Re: New Flyer   Wed Nov 22, 2006 2:33 pm maybe try not having the ' sorry i cant help with your boiler ' text going all the way across the page. I would also try lining the yellow answer text with the ...'s and ...'s if you get what i mean. _________________ Graphic and Web Design Forum   Toon Admin Age : 28 Joined : 15 Nov 2006 Posts : 746 Location : Sheffield Subject: Re: New Flyer   Wed Nov 22, 2006 3:01 pm Like this: _________________ Colour Printing and Integrated Cards Graphics and Web Design Graphic and Web Design Forum Social Bookmarking for Designers Logo Design UK Last edited by on Wed Dec 06, 2006 8:23 am; edited 1 time in total   Kira-Dee Age : 22 Joined : 16 Nov 2006 Posts : 333 Location : Sheffield Subject: Re: New Flyer   Wed Nov 22, 2006 3:57 pm I Like the colouring under the woman it looks like she is doing press ups on water, It may sound wierd but look close _________________ Visit the Betty Boop Forum Graphic Design & Web Design Forum   Toon Admin Age : 28 Joined : 15 Nov 2006 Posts : 746 Location : Sheffield Subject: Re: New Flyer   Wed Nov 22, 2006 3:59 pm Quite right my dear, it was actually a reflection from a Gym floor but if you change the Grey shadow to a Blue Grey you get a watery shadow effect. _________________ Colour Printing and Integrated Cards Graphics and Web Design Graphic and Web Design Forum Social Bookmarking for Designers Logo Design UK   Kira-Dee Age : 22 Joined : 16 Nov 2006 Posts : 333 Location : Sheffield Subject: Re: New Flyer   Wed Nov 22, 2006 4:00 pm You learn something new everyday _________________ Visit the Betty Boop Forum Graphic Design & Web Design Forum   El Peligroso Age : 25 Joined : 20 Nov 2006 Posts : 489 Location : Sheffield 6 Subject: Re: New Flyer   Thu Nov 23, 2006 9:06 am I was thinking more like the : after answer being lined up on the same line as the last . on the top line and the first . on the other, might just be me but i like that sort of thing _________________ Graphic and Web Design Forum   Ron 123 Guest Subject: Re: New Flyer   Fri Nov 24, 2006 11:30 am I think it's much improved already   Toon Admin Age : 28 Joined : 15 Nov 2006 Posts : 746 Location : Sheffield Subject: Re: New Flyer   Sat Nov 25, 2006 8:01 pm Thanks 4 the input _________________ Colour Printing and Integrated Cards Graphics and Web Design Graphic and Web Design Forum Social Bookmarking for Designers Logo Design UK   stealth- Guest Subject: Re: New Flyer   Mon Feb 12, 2007 8:36 am Like the varying colours   New Flyer     Page 1 of 1 Permissions of this forum: You cannot reply to topics in this forum Graphic Design and Web Design Forum :: General :: Help Me!! 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