Attached is a flyer I've done but I don't like the typography layout as it is please crit would like to hear any ideas:

I think it's because there's too much text to fit into the space, can you take any of the text out??

Nope, not my content.

i'd say try making the text smaller depending on the flyer size...

I would make the black text a bit smaller and maybe some of the headings bigger to help the hierarchy, it's very clear colour-wise but not so much type size-wise. Apart from that, as usual clear, concise and well layed out.

what is with the two white lines on the top image?

they look a little out of position, to me...

New version with smaller black text:



The lines on the top were meant to look like this.

maybe try not having the ' sorry i cant help with your boiler ' text going all the way across the page.

I would also try lining the yellow answer text with the ...'s and ...'s if you get what i mean.

Like this:

I Like the colouring under the woman it looks like she is doing press ups on water, It may sound wierd but look close

Quite right my dear, it was actually a reflection from a Gym floor but if you change the Grey shadow to a Blue Grey you get a watery shadow effect.

You learn something new everyday

I was thinking more like the : after answer being lined up on the same line as the last . on the top line and the first . on the other, might just be me but i like that sort of thing

I think it's much improved already

Thanks 4 the input

Like the varying colours